Of Chickens
Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:38 pmI wrote a poem recently titled Of Chickens and today I read the poem infront of a large crowd at a bookstore as part of open mic night.
Here's the poem for you guys to enjoy/hate/flame/critique.
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Of Chickens
Chicken go cluck, cluck
go cock-a-doodle do!
They are my friends
and friends of you!
They flap their wings but do not fly,
In the early morning, they screech a loud cry.
Chickens are in my heart and in my yard,
and sometimes in my stomach when they are chard.
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If you want to use this poem for something like presenting it in your classroom or to other people, my name is Jonathan Holmes, just so you know!
Here's the poem for you guys to enjoy/hate/flame/critique.
...
Of Chickens
Chicken go cluck, cluck
go cock-a-doodle do!
They are my friends
and friends of you!
They flap their wings but do not fly,
In the early morning, they screech a loud cry.
Chickens are in my heart and in my yard,
and sometimes in my stomach when they are chard.
...
If you want to use this poem for something like presenting it in your classroom or to other people, my name is Jonathan Holmes, just so you know!
I like the fact that it increases in syllables, if you just say that short line after the previous it sounds like you just wanted to add a rhyming word as opposed to creating a thought out sentence, but that's just me. I think it sounds great 
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