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Rate:Pirate without a sky

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:14 pm
by Supashay91
Tinkering with layers
Image

Comments appreciated!

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:31 pm
by .Yunoko
nice could work on the text and try to blend the render in a bit more...
nice colors could use a few more effects keep it up
maybe lessen the light source right in the middle and put some to the left and right

over all 8.6/10

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:36 pm
by Mailas
Good effects
Good use of C4D

Bad Text
Not the best blending for you're render

Overall: 7.1/10

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:45 pm
by TK421
**********I wont commment on the c4ds...you know how i feel about those... ;)

For the sig, very very good depth, try adding a light source, and work on that text...

Nice Job overall thou ;)

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:52 pm
by .Yunoko
ya you should add a v 2 or somthing with some or all of these suggestions

PostPosted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 9:13 pm
by Supashay91
I added the C4d because the sig was just missing something, and that was the only thing I could think of throwing in.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 10:09 am
by gman
7.5/10