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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:20 pm

i guess sue wasnt the right word. ok? I mean they could do a ton of things. EX: shut us down or take us(monkey) to court.

This is going a little far with it but i just mean them thinking ISO when we say Free Games doesnt sound good to me. Get it?
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:26 pm

Yea, it is probably better off to specify what "free games" really means.
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:31 pm

What about...

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I reakon this one is ok, it's hard to say stuff like IRShell because you'd have to explain what it is.
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:40 pm

Well it says
flier wrote:The only site for anything PSP..

But we don't really have everything psps cuz we don't have ISO files :P. And we aren't really the only site, just the best one :wink: .
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:41 pm

A little propaganda never hurt anyone..
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:52 pm

perfect......Looks awesome. That should get people in here.

I know u want to keep the wording equal but maybe "of it" behind "do u want to use the full power?" or better yet edit that into "Do you want its full power?" and once again. Add punctuation. Then i will give it a thumbs up.
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:53 pm

Ok, i'll do it in a second. Gotta fix my computer desk.

EDIT: This should be good enough.

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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:09 pm

It's really great, but to be honest, it IS a little wordy. However, I don't think that any of the words need to be cut out or anything. Instead, I'd suggest using a different font when you start to describe the features of the website. In fact, it would be really great if you made a bulleted list for those features, and used mini PSP icons for the "bullets". I like that you put the other sites in the brewology as well... but even graphixbrew needs some love ;) lol

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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:10 pm

Picky picky picky. Lol, i'll try soon.
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:19 pm

Reigo80 wrote:Picky picky picky. Lol, i'll try soon.


Advertising on a flyer is hard to do... there's got to be attractive visuals and if there are different fonts, it really makes people stop and read the different sections. So yea, it's picky, but it pretty much HAS to be.

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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:23 pm

I'm going to a fair soon so i'll have to fix it up when I get back. Sorry.
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Post Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:35 pm

That's fine Reigo. I'm expecting this to be done within the next 5 days or so. We have time to come up with something that the forum, as a whole, deems worthy of advertising PSPBrew with.

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Post Tue Nov 13, 2007 11:26 pm

Is this kinda what you meant? Sorry if I misinterpreted it.

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Post Wed Nov 14, 2007 1:26 am

That's exactly what I was talking about... but it still doesn't seem right. And what I THINK it is... is the fonts. Both of them. They're all over the place... I like the font and all, but it REALLY doesn't look "inviting" to read.

The red font is ok... but let me sit on this, and I'll think of some revisions.

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Post Wed Nov 14, 2007 3:04 am

Kay. I'm helping with the flyer because I want to get into advertising or something like that. Any help or critsism would be accepted.
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